Well, I got the final totally proofread copy of Crumbling Sky back today, and I've decided to just go with it instead of continue working on it. To hell with it. I realized my biggest problem with it is that it feels like a TV pilot more than a self-contained novel, but that's just the way it is, and I can't change that. It's just the nature of the series. So that's it. I'll send it off to have the interior designed next, and that will be that.
I'm excited though. I feel like a lot of hard work is finally coming to fruition and I can't wait to get these books out there into the world.